MERC Camp Longbay

Student conferences Term 3

Term 3

What am I looking forward to is, going camp and also I really want to
learn all about the things that  we going to do there.Also I am really looking forward is
doing archery,sailing and climbing up the tree.That is what I am looking forward too?And also sleeping on the bunk beds.

Playing on the park is so really fun.

Looking outside the window and the beach outside.

Sleeping on the bunk beds is cool and maginficent.

My Writing Learning Goals

This term i am working on my 2 writing goals.


They are:
Add detail to expand my ideas.
Add detail that tells the reader: how, when and where.

I will know I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence of these in my writing.

The amazing time ever!!!

Yesterday i went to this amazing surprise at Eden park well first we all went out of the bus,then we went to go and see the men ruby cloak bay where,they chance and shower. Then we all went to see the Mirrors and did you know the rugby team use hair straighter?. After that we all went to have dinner up stairs but the stairs made me tided of walking. But when we got there we were so really surprised and we get to eat outside sweet!. Then we got to the special surprise we all went inside then we have to hide our self,when we when everybody was clapping for us and we were all happy i was number 12 and when i saw my bike i was so happy to see it.